This week’s Microfantasy Monday theme is “Exhibitionism/Voyeurism” .. thanks to the lovely Ang, the Sweltering Celt.
Looking through windows...watching through doors...
Up and down the isles and just about every where.
Young couples caught up in the throws of young love.
Established couples chasing kids, eyes connecting when bodies can't.
Mature couples helping each other navigate a world that isn't so nice any more.
A simple smile. A touch to the base of the spine. A glimmer in the eye.
I watch and wish and wonder what will happen next.
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You dont seem to get a chance to write often - you should. I really like your stuff. I somehow missed cleaning - it was good. Also the explosion in reverse was excellent.
ReplyDeleteThis one is (as you said) not as spicy as others, but it is subtle, gentle, and sweet - I really enjoyed it. Please keep up your writing.
I don't post thoughts a lot because an ex reads this and comments and I can't figure out how to block just one person.
ReplyDeleteOne possibility is to password it - a little bad cause you have to give your password to anyone you want to read it, but it certainly provides a level of control.
ReplyDeleteI noticed that comment earlier - I wasn't sure if that was really him or not.
You also can put comments on moderation so they dont appear until you approve them. That way he can read but not write - it'll drive him nutz :)
Feel free to respond via direct tweet or email if you wish. There are other options... I'd hate to miss your writing just because of someone else's bad behavior.